Monday 9 February 2009

Log feedback

During the course of our media lesson the students in our media class had to analyze each other's blogs. Many people had suggested an area for improvement in the blog and they had to also make positive points which is aimed at improving our overall score of marks in our opening sequence project.

Positive points of our blog
  • Detailed call sheet - it is really good
  • Plenty of posts and a lot of information to go with them
  • Lots of pictures, videos and examples etc...
  • Excellent location intake, clear images reflected
  • Unique Ident
  • Good location research
  • Really in depth research and good preparation for filming
  • Good genre research
  • Strong shot
Areas for improvement
  • Needs a couple of images
  • Test footage needs to be improved
  • Have not yet defined all the film types and their conventions
  • Animatic sequence, could have information (how you came about creating it?)

So how can we improve our blog? Well we welcome every constructive criticism because our aim is to figure out every flaw in our blog and improving it. As we aim to reach the highest amount of marks available, we are going to have to consider what our audience think could be done to upgrade it. This can be achieved by including more images, give the audience a visual image of our intent of producing our project and by being more descriptive in our thoughts whilst writing our blogs.

Comparing our opening sequence blog to our last thriller project blog, I believe, there is a huge difference because when writing our thriller blog, it was our first time doing such a task and took a while because it is like writing in a diary. However we believe our current blog has got much more potential to please our audience. Also we are going to aim for winning the blog-of-the-week title.

By Önder Köyel

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